my newest song 'Now' first go round with self editing

[ashyoungson]

http://soundcloud.com/ashley-claire-young/now

I suck at editing and max out my ipad a little....

Other than that im digging it.

 

[Barbablanca]

That's a nice song. Any chance of putting the lyrics here? I always spot strengths and weaknesses in lyrics better when I can see them in cold B&W

My only criticism would be that the reverb is a bit heavy for my taste. But perhaps that "distant" sound was what you were aiming for a song that takes place upside down in a mirror

 

[hucklelele]

THAT is a friggin GREAT track!
In fact the other songs posted there are really nice too- The Wire, Gypsy and Jack in the Box song songs have really solid clever lyrics
Did you write them? Really imaginative!

and you have a GREAT voice

all with simple effective backing- did you record these yourself?

In any case, you have lots of talent- KEEP AT IT!